Nathan Gage
- Voice
- Rock band instruments
- 13 to 18 years of age
3 months of curricular music classes
- Education
Guided Group Songwriting
Description
James Lyng High School’s music program draws on students’ musical preferences, including hip-hop, EDM, punk, metal, rock, and pop. To prepare for our school’s end-of-year mixtape, each student band writes and records an original song. Depending on students’ ability levels, the writing process is guided and scaffolded to varying degrees, with the least experienced students requiring the most support. This project addresses group songwriting by featuring student perspectives and examples through short audio interviews.
When working with my youngest groups at James Lyng, I most often start by having them identify a song they want to model their original song after. It helps if they have already learned to play the song, as familiarity with its notes and chords makes them more active participants in songwriting. We begin by discussing many of the song’s qualities, including lyrics, feel, vocal phrasing, key, and chords, as well as which qualities the students most want to emulate.
Creating a Foundation
To start the creation process, I will guide student groups to create either a chord progression or a riff as a foundation for their song. The group will decide which direction to start in, informed by their chosen song.
- Creating a Chord Progression: There are two principal ways that I have students come up with a chord progression.
- The first is to encourage students to rearrange the chords of their chosen song into a new progression. I often have students plug headphones into their amplifiers so they can hear only themselves. A period of experimentation is followed by a period of sharing.
- In the second approach, I guide the chord-creation process more actively. Using my guitar, I show the students the key center of their chosen song and demonstrate the key’s diatonic chords, reciting the scale degrees associated with each chord as I play. I do not include the diminished chord of the key as an option (VII chord in major keys, II chord in minor keys). I recommend that the group start their chord progression on the tonic chord, as that is the convention in pop music. I ask students to suggest a second chord. I will play the transition between the tonic chord and their chosen chord. We will audition several chords until the group chooses one. We will then audition a third chord, and so on, until we decide on one or two 4- or 8‑bar progressions.
- Creating a Riff
- In the past, I have had one or two motivated guitar players who have created riffs independently and shared them with the group.
- Alternatively, I will teach the group the scale associated with their chosen song by rote. This will be followed by a period of experimentation with headphones plugged into their amps, and then a period of sharing.
Creating a Mock-up Recording
After establishing the song’s foundation, I will teach the group how to play the chord progression or riff. We will jam on the new element, often adapting strumming and drum patterns from their chosen song to the new context. Additionally, I will create a mock-up recording in a DAW. I will program virtual drums in the DAW based on the new drum part and overdub guitar and bass to match what the group is playing.
This living document will serve many purposes. It will allow students to develop vocal melodies without the added burden of playing their instruments. It will also serve as the basis for our classroom recording. I find that many young drummers who have difficulty playing to a click track will find it easier to play to a mock-up recording.
Creating Lyrics and Vocal Melodies
The process of creating lyrics and vocal melodies is often intertwined, and I try to have students guide the activities as much as possible. I find the following techniques reliable at this stage:
- Singing over the mock-up recording: I often have the students collectively create a single rhyming couplet to establish vocal phrasing. An intuitive student singer can try singing the lyrics over the mock-up recording. I will often record successful attempts so we can audition them in the following class.
- Improvising melodies on the keyboard: Most DAWs can transpose a VST instrument, allowing students to play freely on the white keys regardless of the song’s key center. I often have students take turns improvising over the full song while recording in MIDI. In the following class, the group will listen back to the recordings and identify the strongest melodies.
- If students are having difficulty establishing lyrical phrasing, or if they are unsatisfied with the phrasing, have them sing or recite the lyrics to other songs they know, including their chosen song, over the mock-up recording. They cannot keep these lyrics, but the process may inspire phrasing they are satisfied with.
- I sometimes guide students to create an internal rhyme in their initial rhyming couplet, which establishes an ABAB rhyme scheme. This gives them the option to try the lyrics at halftime, for example, over 8 bars instead of 4 bars.
- I often email my students a mixdown of the current mock-up track and ask them to write lyrics on a specified theme for homework. Even if what they bring does not match the song’s initial lyrical phrasing, it can be adapted in class. Having a wealth of potential content on a shared theme helps keep the process moving.
Grade 7
The songwriting process with this year’s Grade 7 cohort followed these steps fairly consistently. This group had previously chosen to learn “Sweater Weather” by The Neighborhood, and they chose to model their song after it. To help generate ideas, we discussed many aspects of “Sweater Weather,” including its lyrics, feel, vocal phrasing, key, and chords. I presented the diatonic chords of the song’s key on guitar while reciting their scale degrees. After auditioning several chord combinations, the group settled on two possible progressions.
To prepare for the next class, I recorded both chord progressions in a DAW. I had willing students take turns improvising on the white keys of a transposed piano keyboard while I recorded their ideas via MIDI. During the same class, we began discussing lyrical themes that matched the mood of the chord progression. Over several classes, we worked to create lyrics. Students brought content they had created at home, and we worked to mold it into consistent phrases that fit the song’s structure. Once a consistent lyrical framework had been established, we revisited the melodic fragments students had improvised on the keyboard, auditioning them with the newly written lyrics. While the students responded positively to several of these melodies, the singer ultimately gravitated to another melody that she developed intuitively. The group felt that this melody suited the song and her voice, and it became the song’s vocal melody.
To complete the lyrics, we established a small “lyric committee” that met twice after school to finish the text. Throughout the songwriting process, we also took time to practice the chord progression and develop instrumental parts to support the melody and lyrics. These instrumental parts borrowed significantly from “Sweater Weather,” especially in the verse.
Here is my conversation with Grade 7 students Rocklyn and Emiliah about creating their class song.
Grade 8
When working with this year’s Grade 8 band, I used some of the same strategies but left more room for student autonomy. The band decided to model their original song after “Blink Gone” from the anime series “Alien Stage,” which they had previously played. Because the verse of “Blink Gone” is built around a guitar riff, I asked the students to plug headphones into their amplifiers and compose their own riffs. Although I did not explicitly show them the song’s scale (Cm), we had just played it together, and almost all the students intuitively gravitated toward its tonal center. During the sharing session, I recorded each of their riffs and later transcribed them into tablature so the band could learn and experiment with the ideas in the following class.
Both the students and I were surprised by how naturally the riffs could be layered over one another, and the group quickly formed a loose song structure. Two students in particular wanted to write lyrics and melodies, and they chose to do so instead of another classroom assignment. One student quickly wrote lyrics and composed a vocal melody. The other struggled to find words and melodies that met her expectations.
During our conversations while we tried to establish a vocal melody, she mentioned she wanted it to sound more like Mitski’s “Washing Machine Heart.” I encouraged her to sing the song over the mock-up recording of our original song. The first fragment of Mitski’s melody fit very well, but in its new context it was almost unrecognizable. This felt like a breakthrough, leading her to finish the melody and lyrics.
In this audio excerpt, I speak with Grade 8 students Téarrah and Gab about writing their class song.
Grade 9
This song is from one of my Grade 9 bands. The group is really just a duo that regularly plays with me, or sometimes with student musicians from other grade levels. Both members are exceptional improvisers, which is wonderful, but it also can present challenges. It can be difficult to get them to commit to an idea and develop it into a song. To help focus their efforts, I insisted they write lyrics, as I felt doing so would anchor their musical ideas. I scaffolded the lyric-writing process using some of the steps described in this post. Although the results were mixed, I feel that these structured lyric-writing sessions led them to discover their own alternatives. After several weeks of struggling to develop lyrics, a particularly productive session with the drummer yielded a full set of lyrics and melody for the verse and chorus, after which the rest of the song fell into place.
Here is my conversation with Grade 9 students Logan and Quinn about their original song.
Grade 10
This final song is from one of my Grade 10 bands. Two of its members are dedicated musicians who regularly spend their lunch hours in the school’s music studio, and much of the song was written outside class time. Both students brought musical ideas they had developed at home to be integrated into the class song. As a teacher, I provided very little guidance on creating music, but I sometimes helped them find ways to bridge their musical ideas. I also helped them create the song’s overarching structure. I took a more active role in scaffolding the lyric-writing process, drawing at times on some of the strategies described in this post. While the lyrics the group wrote through this structured process had conventional phrasing, the band’s singer subverted that phrasing when singing them. He also added his own vocal melodies through improvisation.
This is my conversation with Grade 10 students Dean and Jahvon about writing their original song.
The musical examples in these recorded conversations are rough mixes. To listen to the complete songs by these and other James Lyng students, visit www.upnextrecordings.com.
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